Alice's idea 1

Alice's idea #1

In the heart of Yorkshire, dead people keeps appearing. The en-sub has completely gone over kill on the last 2 victims. The local police have called in a detective called Dr Reid, she is a well-known profiler. Dr Reid goes out to the latest crime scene, he notices something strange about the latest victim, and her mouth was sown shut. The women has dark brown hair and so did the rest of the victims. Dr Reid is young woman who has long dark brown. That night Dr Reid was walking back to her car, it was cold and wet and out of the shadows appeared a tall skinny man dressed in black, he grabbed Dr Reid hit round the back of the head with a hammer. Everything went dark and Reid was alone and scared. Reid woke in a pool of blood surrounded by other women, she was unsure of who’s blood she was laid on but she wasn’t in the cold damp cellar anymore she was in the front room of mental asylum, there were pictures of the asylum on the wall in front of her, she saw how beautiful the building was and what it’s like now. 

       

Reid awoke after 16 hours of being unconscious, she woke in a damp cell surrounded by 15 other woman. She tried to scream and break free but her hands were tied and her mouth was taped over. She saw the untouched kids toys on the floor, they were collecting dust, Reid looked around for a possible escape route and saw a small opening in the cell gate, she shuffled over to the gate of the call and opened it, as she did so the gate creaked and the en-sub came running down the cellar steps.

She stood up and ran, she ran as fast as she could through the dark cold forest surrounding the asylum, the en-sub was running after her, he soon caught up to her his eyes dark, his lips cracked and split, his skin was white. There was cold scream.